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The Devil Within by =Kung-fu-girl90:iconKung-fu-girl90:



Oh you tricky devil you
With your lovely lies
And deceitful eyes
Charming away the guise

Oh you, with your handsome face
Of which underneath, lies a wicked grace
Your devilish smile, playing around your lips
As everything goes according to your scripts

Oh you devilish demon
With eyes, so clear
As you wash away their fear
Oh how ironically sincere

Your words, how they tempt them so
Slick to the ears, oh how they flow
String them along, like mindless sheep
Serenading them to eternal sleep

Oh, you devil of devils
With your trickery and wile
Go ahead, while you still can, with your guile
However, know that soon, it shall be your trial
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Author's Comments

I think this is the first poem that I've ever written that does not have a title to it. I honestly can't think of anything that fits this sort of poem.

There is an underlying feeling in this poem, I specifically wrote it so that the nature of this poem conflicts. It is completely open to interpretation. Take of it what you will.

Edit: I've just added a title to the poem.

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:icontheaspeninthewillows:
Oh! Very nice. The words were perfect. :)

I would leave a critique but sadly, I know nothing about poetry.
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Well, in any case, thanks for leaving a comment and I'm glad you liked it. :)

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