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Poetry in Motion: Le Parkour by =Kung-fu-girl90:iconKung-fu-girl90:



I prep myself as the adrenalin pumps,
Getting ready to do those tricky jumps.
Defying gravity as I fly through the air,
All without a care.
Fear leaves my mind as my muscles tense,
For there is no time for it all to make sense.
One slip and it may be my last,
However that is all past.
As I run through the streets,
All is a blur, as everything meets.
There is nothing that can stop me,
Not gravity, not fear, not anybody.
There is no fear for the pain,
For I have everything to gain.
The world is my playground,
No restrictions, nothing to bind me down.
Pushing myself further as I run,
I cannot deny that this is fun.
To become one with the wind,
All becomes akin.
With the air rushing past my ears,
There is nothing more I can hear.
My senses, numb to the mind,
As I am now with my kind.
The adrenalin pumps through my blood,
While I keep running through the mud.
My heart races, as my mind flies away,
My breath catches, as my fear goes astray.
There is nothing that can touch me, not even the air itself,
All rushes past me, as I lose even myself.
For while I am running, for those few precious seconds,
I become one, as the child in me beckons.
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Author's Comments

I've been meaning to post this up for a while but due to circumstances, I wasn't able to.

This is just something that I threw together. Let me tell you, rhyming like this was so hard, I almost lost it.

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:iconwierden:
hey , it's great :D

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The world isn't a perfect place , but it's there for us , there to see it , to touch it , to feel it and that's why the world is so damn beautiful
:iconkung-fu-girl90:
Thanks

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"We're all the same level of stupid, just different flavors." - =HisnameisDaveyoufool [link]
:iconwierden:
my pleasure :D

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The world isn't a perfect place , but it's there for us , there to see it , to touch it , to feel it and that's why the world is so damn beautiful
:iconraftataft:
coolness!

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Sgt. Pepper reporting for duty. Back in the USSR!
:iconsilverwolf71190:
I'm guessing you didn't accept the critique?

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Sweet sounds of music
Fill the air like perfume,
Yet not strong enough to silence
All the sounds of the night.

Love The Beatles! :peace:
:iconhannatheglow:
thats a really good:)
explains exacly how I feel when I'm doing parkour:D
:iconkung-fu-girl90:
Thank you.

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=Kung-fu-girl90
Admin of ~written-from-within
Check it out!

"We're all the same level of stupid, just different flavors." - =HisnameisDaveyoufool [link]

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